Thursday, March 17, 2005

Another Sequential

This sequential story showed a young boy hollering and yelling and at one point cupping his hands over his mouth for greater volume. I find this one funny. It's definitely junior level thinking!


Butcher

The bloody spectacle was incredibly seductive. Charlie stood, ready for the great competition that he would own if only he could let one last good one fly. He prepared his nostrils. As the sickening, bloody human fragment flew from the inner depths of his nose and throat with a noise to put hungry demons to shame, the crowd began to cheer. Charlie saw it fly farther than even last year's champion's entry had gone. He cheered himself. And as it landed in one splatt of noise as if it were quicksand sucking itself in, he let loose with a victory yell. The 14th Annual Nose‑Blowers Distance Classic had been won by a seven‑year‑old from Harlem.


Teacher's Comments: This is so gross--and so original! A+

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