Friday, October 15, 2004

Revenge Comic page 1 thru 3

Revenge

Issue #1

Page One
Splash Page: Title: Rebirth
Picture of a morgue with at least 12 gurneys with a dead body on each, all covered with a sheet. Each has a toe tag.
Text Box: Workers here joke about this being the dead center of downtown. They say that not because of the bodies, but because the real action has already happened elsewhere.
Text Box #2: Whether murder, or suicide, or natural causes, these people have shuffled off this mortal coil. Their time is done.

Page Two
Four panels, first being the biggest.
Panel One: Action shot of one of the bodies (Revenge), sitting bolt upright suddenly, as if gasping for breath from being underwater.
Text box: Or not.
Panel Two: Revenge looking around the room while sitting on gurney.
Thought dialogue:...Where am I? Did those bullets miss me?
Panel Three: Closeup of Revenge feeling his chest.
Thought Dialogue: Oh my God, I've been hit.
Panel Four: Closeup of wound, cleaned up.
Thought dialogue: Wait a minute...no blood? Who was shooting at me anyway? I can't remember...

Page Three
Four panels
Panel One: Exasperated Revenge turns scared as a body next to him moans.
Panel Two: Revenge staring at the body as it moves slowly underneath the sheet.
Thought dialogue: A morgue? Is that body moving?
Panel Three: As if from Revenge's perspective, looking down at his own naked stomach, sheet, gurney.
Thought dialogue: Am I...?
Panel four: Closeup of Revenge's toe tag, name has to say "Doe, John."
Thought dialogue: ...Supposed to be dead??

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